I have one line I am attempting to translate into Zulu. The line is

"in the manifested presence of God".
Using the isiZulu.net search engine, I couldn't find a word for manifested, so I replaced that word with revealed. I couldn't find a word that seemed reflect His presence either so I subsistuted the line to read:

"in the revealed face of God".

This is what I came up with:

"Vezeni ubuso amakosi"

Since I know next to nothing about sentence structure, I'm feeling that I'm destroying an otherwise beautiful language. Can someone help me with this translation,, pleeeeeeaaaasssseeee????

ngiyabong kakhulu, bazalwane!

Manifest = reveal, show, display, exhibit v.

ekubonakalisweni

siyabonga mzalwane Mshengu! ibandla lethu selizovuka manje ngemuva kokubuya kukamfudisi uMbokazi ekudingisweni

bengisathe ukuvakasha kancane ngokwengqondo kodwa manje ngibona sengathi ngeluleme okusho kona ukuthi kwasuka lokho

ninjani kodwa?


mina ngidla ukuba busy ngihlangane nomuntu othi wayeyisinqanda mathe sika Mshengu(uMfundisi omkhulu) ngicishe ngawa phansi.

Mbokazi wami ocwebezelayo unjani kodwa?

Nobuhle, musa ukwenza okungacwebileyo. Yini manje lena oyitshela isigungu. Sengichazele nje ngalomlungu... Besingathandani. Besingabangani nje kwaphela. Futhi engathi lomlungu udlala ngawe manje.

Lamagama akho aneziswana maDlamini... Ngicela ushintshe bandla. Mbokazi, ake ngihlongoze isiguqo khona sizommbeka izandla ekhanda umaDlamini mhlawumbe lelidimoni elimmbambile lizophuma.

sanibonani

udla ngami kanjani umlungu Mshengu?

Kunesiphukuphuku la

musani ukudumaza uMshengu ngiyanicela, phela uMshengu unguphumasilwe, angashintsha esithubeni ajike athukuthele angasadle nkobe zamuntu akhiphe isikwili nobhoko ajoje umuntu ngomkhonto qede sigcine singenawo amalunga anele. Nginithanda nonke ngakhoke musani ukujivaza elinye ilunga, akuthule ebandleni ngiyanicela.

Mfundisi Mbokazi, besengicijile impela. Sengizohlonipha wena mfowethu. Kodwa uma ngiqale ngicabanga lesisidwanyampuphu, ngizwa kusiphuka nezinwele zobhozo impela . Kodwa ke,sekwenele.

Cha Mshengu ndoda yamadoda hlala usungasaqedeli ukulola ume khona lapho ngoba uma ungaqedela kuzonuka itshe lentaba kumoshakale impela, yehlisa umoya wakho uzothe ube nokuthula ngoba kuhle ukuthula futhi kuyathandeka, yebo ngiyazi ukuthi inhliziyo ayiphakelwa futhi asifani singewona amazinyo ngakhoke hlanganani bazalwane kwasho uJesu kubafundi bakhe, ngakhoke ibani nyanda yinye sifunde sifundisane ngoba iyona ndaba esize ngayo la ekhaya.

Kulungile Mbokazi